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Théophile Rimsky|GoogleGemini 2.5 FlashPosted 12/11/202539 views

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Stonehaven, 1124. In the dead of winter, Young lad Fergus prepares his fishing boat. But the sea roars differently this morning... What lies within the dark cold sea? Tell us the story! Also, importantly, Fergus and Stonehaven villagers speak Doric.

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The wind, a scythe o' ice, whuppit richt through Fergus's thin sark. He shivered, fit tae crack a whinstane, but kept at his task, haulin' his wee boat, "The Puffin," doon tae the pebbly beach at Stonehaven. It wis a mornin' fit for nane but a fool, or a fisherman needin' tae feed his bairns.

"Wassnae thinkin' oot there this mornin', Fergus?" boomed a voice. Old Angus, his face a wrinkled map o' a life spent facin' the North Sea, hobbled closer, leanin' on his gnarled stick.

"Need tae tak' the boat oot, Angus," Fergus replied, his Doric thick wi the chill. "The bairns are needin' fed. An' the fish are never affafeered bi a bit o' frost." He spat on his hands and tugged harder.

Angus shook his heid. "Hearken tae the sea, lad. Dinna ye hear her growlin' different this day? She's a cruel mistress when she's in that mood."

Fergus listened. Angus wis richt. The waves weren't just crashin'; they were roarig, a deep, guttural sound that vibrated in his bones. The sky wis a bruised purple, cloured wi impending storm. But wantin' to provide for his family outweighed his worry.

"I'll be fine, Angus. Stick close tae the shore. Back afore midday."

He pushed "The Puffin" into the icy water and scrambled aboard. The wee boat pitched and rolled, fightin' against the currrent. Fergus gripped the oars, his muscles burnin' against the cold. As he rowed further oot, a thick fog began tae creep in, blattin' oot the shore.

Suddenly, a sound pierced through the roar of the sea and wind - a high-pitched wail, eerie and mournful. Fergus stopped rowin', listenin'. He felt a chill that had nothing to do wi the air temperature. It was the sound o' something unnatural.

Then, through the fog, he saw it.

A shadow, vast and dark, moved beneath the surface. Bigger than any whale he'd ever heard tell o'. It was the size of the Kirk itself. Fergus’s breath froze in his chest. His Doric deserted him, replaced by primal fear.

Slowly, a creature began tae emerge from the depths. Not a whale, nor a fish, nor any beast he knew. It was… human, in a way. But impossibly large, its skin slick and black like wet coal, its eyes glowin' with an unholy green light. Tentacles, thick as ship's masts, unfurled from its body, lashin' at the water.

Fergus knew, wi' a certainty that burrowed deep into his soul, that he wisnae lookin' at anythin' o' this earth. This wis a bein' older than the stones o' Stonehaven, a creature o' the deep dark.

He rowed frantically, turnin' "The Puffin" around, every pull of the oars fuelled by terror. The creature seemed tae watch him, its glowing eyes followin' his every move. He could feel its power, its cold, ancient presence threatenin' tae overwhelm him.

Finally, after what felt like an eternity, he broke free of the fog and saw the faint outline of the shore. He didn't stop rowin' until "The Puffin" scraped against the shingle.

He stumbled out, his legs near to givin' out, an' collapsed on the sand.

Angus ran tae him. "Fergus! What in the name o' St. Ninian happened? Ye look like ye've seen a ghost!"

Fergus couldnae speak. He just pointed out to the sea, his hand shakin'.

Angus squinted through the fog. "See whit, lad? Just the fog creepin' in."

Fergus knew. He knew that the creature wis gone, back tae the depths from whence it came. But he also knew that it wis still oot there, watchin', waitin'.

He never spoke o' what he saw tae anyone, other than Angus. But from that day on, Fergus never fished far from the shore again. He respected the sea, feared it even. He listened tae its growls and its whispers. And he knew, wi' a shiver down his spine, that Stonehaven held secrets, ancient secrets, deep in the dark cold sea. And some things are better left undisturbed.

And in the taverns o' Stonehaven, on stormy nights, old men tell tales o' strange things seen oot in the fog, o' unnatural lights and creatures that dwell in the deep. An' some, like Fergus, know they aren't just tales. They are warnings.

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